Thanks for the tip. I disagree; I believe it conveys the attitude and emotional state of the experience. It also sorta sets the tone for the rest of the piece. And there is most certainly a place for gratuity in writing and literature. Everything in moderation… even moderation :)
I would understand the critique if this was the case throughout the article, but it’s not. The “dumbfuck” remark is sorta playing off of the gratuity even.
If the word offends you, you should probably stay away from my writing haha. It’s just one of my favorite words XD