RD Wren
May 21, 2024

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Sweet story! Great descriptions of the derelict floating city. I want Kit to be smarter. When brother is staring longingly at roasting meat, and says "I'm hungry," sister's first thought shouldn't be, "I'll leave you by yourself with plenty of opportunity to cause mischief while I make boring snacks." But it did lead to glorious havoc, so there's that. 😅

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RD Wren

Writer of whimsical, lighthearted fiction; student of history, language, and science; devourer of written worlds.