A commendable effort. I made a few corrections privately — didn’t want to make an issue of it — or seem too pedantic. It was the Spanish philosopher Miguel de Unamuno that said (in Spanish) “A person who speaks too languages is worth two people.” What he meant is language is culture and by learning another you open yourself up to another world. Being able to see and live in two worlds “doubles your pleasure, doubles your fun,” to quote the old Doublemint chewing gum commercial!
You get an A+ for effort and a B for beginning Spanish. (I guess you can tell I was once a Spanish teacher.)