Genial, a lovely “echo” story. I lke the way you sketch in the characters, the mom, the dad, the little girl, Bea — and, of course, the old man. A few deft descriptions and pow! I can see them. (Frankly, I personally don’t write or often like ghost stories — I am an imagination-challenged skeptic. — but I really liked this one. Nice work!

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    Ronald C. Flores-Gunkle

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    Author of Life In the Uncommonwealth and other titles on Amazon. Currently V.P. and editor of Urbane Traveler magazine www.urbane-traveler.com.