Journal Article Introduction: Tips on how to write an introduction that attracts readers’ interest

The introduction to a research paper can be the most challenging part of writing the paper. A well-written introduction sets the tone of the paper, captures the reader’s interest, and conveys a hypothesis or statement. To attract readers’ interest, a good way to write an introduction is to start with an introduction to the topic of the paper, provide a clear context and detail the research questions and hypotheses that will be explained (Megan Morgan).

A. Introduce the Paper Topic

1. State the topic of the paper. The introduction is written with several sentences that state the topic of the paper and provide instructions regarding the type of research questions that will be asked.

2. Consider referring to key words. Write down several keywords that provide quick clues about the research areas written about.

3. Define any key terms or concepts. It is necessary to clarify any key terms or concepts early in the introduction.

4. Introduce the topic through an anecdote or quote. Can arouse readers’ interest in papers that are written in a more imaginative way and display an interesting writing style.

B. Determine the Context for the Paper

1. Include a brief literature review. This is an important element in a paper, which shows that the author has a strong knowledge and understanding of academic discussions and achievements in the author’s field.

2. Use the bibliography to focus on the author’s contribution. A concise but comprehensive literature review can be a very effective way to structure a research paper.

3. Develop the basics of the paper. It should clearly and concisely demonstrate the value of the paper written and its contribution to the research field. Try not only to say that the written paper provides unknown knowledge, but also emphasize the positive contribution of the written work.

C. Detailing the Research Questions and Research Hypothesis

1. State the research questions. Can detail the research questions presented in the paper. A literature review and research basis structure the research and introduce the written research questions.

2. State the hypothesis. Must provide a hypothesis or statement clearly and concisely that the work written will make a certain contribution and have clear results, not just cover a broader topic.

3. Outline the structure of the paper. The final part of the introduction to a research paper consists of several sentences that provide an overview of the structure of the body of the paper.

I tried to make an introduction to the research I did.

VENTILATION SYSTEM MODELING FOR HEAT CONTROL IN TROPICAL UNDERGROUND MINES

The ventilation system plays an important role in supporting underground mining operations. The safety and comfort of the work environment are the main requirements for increasing work productivity in the mine. The hope is that the ventilation system can control the heat hazards in underground mines so that workers can work safely and comfortably.

Common problems in underground mines are the focus of attention in various countries. In England, mineral extraction is currently carried out at depths of more than 1000 m, with rock temperatures reaching 41.9oC (Lowndes et al., 2004). In South Africa, at a depth of 3300 m, temperatures in mines can reach 50oC. Meanwhile, at the Fengyu Zinc-Pb mine in Japan, at a depth of 500 m, the temperature in the underground mine can reach 80oC. Some mines in China show working temperatures in underground mines exceeding 30oC (Xiaojie et al., 2011). Because air ventilation itself is not enough to remove the heat generated, the application of cooling system technology in underground mines is a solution adopted by a number of these mines.

In Indonesia, challenges arise for underground mining when extracting minerals using underground mining methods at increasingly deeper depths, especially in Indonesia’s tropical climate which has humidity above 90%. Ventilation standards in underground mines are strictly regulated by the Director General’s Decree №185.K/37.04/DJB/2019. This rule stipulates that the air temperature in the mine must be maintained in a comfortable condition for working, namely between 18–27oC with a maximum relative humidity of 85%. Therefore, a ventilation system is needed to achieve the specified ventilation standard conditions.

PT Bumi Sukesindo, located in Banyuwangi, East Java, is a mining company that is currently preparing for underground mining. By considering the location of this underground mine with air temperatures ranging between 23–33oC, and air humidity between 50–95% (BMKG East Java Province, 2023), PT Bumi Sukesindo is considered to be representative in describing the conditions of underground mines in Indonesia. Therefore, this research will model a ventilation system for heat control by referring to heat control practices that have been carried out in various countries. The results of this modeling can provide an effective basis for planning and designing ventilation, in order to create safe and comfortable working conditions for workers in mines in tropical areas.