Apr 13, 2023
I enjoyed reading your poem and can imagine the solemnity. The picture supports the poem well. Consider whether the word -Suddenly- is necessary. It makes me think at the beginning why are they having to suddenly sit.
I enjoyed reading your poem and can imagine the solemnity. The picture supports the poem well. Consider whether the word -Suddenly- is necessary. It makes me think at the beginning why are they having to suddenly sit.
Short stories is my thing. Crime, Mystery, Humour whatever. I want to follow others interested in honing their skills as a story teller.