Rula Savira
Aug 27, 2017 · 1 min read

Hi Aldina,

I personally think that this work is fascinating and I love the way you craft your story. You did well in explaining the correlation between surveillance and popular culture and also referencing, and it seems that you’ve done a good research in terms of making this writing. This truly shows that you are truly passionate in writing this!

However, it would be great to see your big conclusion that summarizes your whole idea for your topic, because I’d love to see more of your critical thoughts on this issue!

Well done, Aldina!

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