Fat Boy off his couch
Luis Valenzuela
5

As I read your story I’m laughing. I love that it’s about a “fat boy” getting off the couch. You have very good imagery and make me feel like I’m one of the fat boy’s friends sitting with him.

Just make sure you have enough story left over to write two more blog posts about this story.

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