Cookies
Samuel Gardner
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I like that you went the untraditional route with the cookie, that instead of making something sweet, you went to make something savory. And I liked that you thought out of the box, substituting a ranch packet for the jello packet in the recipe. Your blog is also organized, and it was easy to find the different sections of your blog.

I wish that you took pictures of your different iterations and documented what tasted different and what you learned from the different iterations as well. I also wish there was more of your idea generation process.

What if you had captions for your pictures? It would help clarify what the reader is looking at and also can offer a brief explanation on what is being documented.