Kelly Sue Brown
Aug 8, 2017 · 1 min read

Hello Benjamin,

I really liked your story. It was very good, basic, understandable, you used characters people could identify with by using a family, most people can identify with a Son or a Father and a home. Your explanation of being an initiator, how basically (thinking out of the box) going steps beyond and thinking ahead instead of what was asked is a certain type of personality. Like a salesman vs a secretary or a w2 wage earner vs an 1099 earner. You either have the ability ( can be learned in most cases) or you don’t. It makes a good mix and is very needed in our economy on both levels. I also wanted to say thank you and tell you what I thought of your story, you asked for my opinion. There you go. Kelly