Good ideas for changes. I’m curious: are you also going to put more women in these stories?
Jed Hartman
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Jed, absolutely. I did realize there’s an additional female character in one of them who’s in the background. She’s in a position of authority so I’m going to give her more “screen time”. In the case of the other two, I’ll definitely be either beefing up the woman’s role that’s in the story (there are only two characters with lines who are human) or including more female characters.