Aug 8, 2017 · 1 min read
“I am disappointed but unsurprised by the news that an anti-diversity, sexist, manifesto”
Look not being a Grammar Nazi, but if your very first sentence contains a pretty big error, it’s probably safe to assume the rest of it will be riddled with them.
Fix this. In some quarters, it destroys your credibility as a writer.
As for the “manifesto”, yes, I’ve read it. It’s basically soft-sell bigotry, back-pedaled in such a way as to make it palatable. Sorry, but BFD. By writing things like this that intimate that this is a company-wide policy, you just buy into his mindset. It could have been easily ignored — and should have been.