#Sherlocked (Live)

Tuesnight Tracks

You are the record._

7 October 2014, [East Bay], California.
40 feet above ground…

Just wanted to say “hello”.
In a situation

8 Car [Home] Train: 5min 24s

potentially.
What does that mean?

[East Bay] BART Station

“situation potentially”?
Where are you?

Platform 2, 10:13 pm

Waiting for train.

8 Car [Home] Train: 4 min 53 s

Are u ok?
ARE U OK?

8 Car [Home] Train: 4 min 32s

Yes.
Wait.
Thugs to my right.

Have to Look Casual_

2 on my left: 1 smoking+slouching; the other facing him, tense.
3 on my right:
2 seated, 1 facing toward me, hostile stance.

Be Aware_

~~~~~~~~~3rd~~~rail~~~~~~~~~
←———43 ft.———→
gnikoms 1 ,esnet 1|:←.tf 81← + → 25 ft.→:|1 hostile, 2 seated
____ledge____
/\
|
.
t
f
0
4
|
\|/
___car____street__car_bus_

8 Car [Home] Train: 4 min 19s

And my left.

Balance._

8 Car [Home] Train: 4 min 03s

Do I need to call somebody?
You are my anchor right now.
Just read.

8 Car [Home] Train: 3 min 23s

Ok
This is the Record.
Just in case.

You are the record.

8 Car [Home] Train: 2 min 22s

I can call [the Police].
I know ur location

backpack must not look important._

Just be still for me, please.

8 Car [Home] Train: Approaching

Ok

Battle Armor_


Credits

Written by BeBeSee.

Principle Photo used by permission of Dominika licensed under CC-By-ND-3.0 at DeviantArt. (Original image is property of the BBC).

Shooting Sherlock by Saschaporsche licensed under CC-By-SA-3.0 via Wikimedia Commons.

Me
Anonymous, a.k.a.:

hind the Scenes

Based on the record of true events as SMS’d
on location in the San Francisco Bay Area.


Key Review

When my-first-crush read this, she said

It was hard to breathe reading it.
So much tension and confusion, so much to notice.
[When I noticed the times]…I read it backwards…and it was still very, very tense

Commentary

Inspired by Sherlock(BBC)’s use of

visual text to tell important bits of the story.

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