Some of the commentors asking about your motives might be served by a disclaimer in an intro that this was written for a college course. And with that in mind, this piece needed two serious passes by an editor to check its many spelling and grammar errors before publication. It’s exciting to complete a well-researched and thoughtful piece and want to immediately publish, but Medium is a wide and discerning readership, not necessarily a place to test a draft. You can see that reflected in the comments. Now you have a sloppy product out there. Truly caring about what you’re offering- as with a restaurant menu or mission statement, an intellectual viewpoint or the subjects, here actual humans, behind it- begins with caring about presenting to the public professionally, respectfully. Thank you.