Sian Henderson
Jul 27, 2017 · 1 min read

Hi Emily,

Well done, great first blog and a good topic top start with for us to consider personal branding and voice as well as yourself in the online world. I found it easy to read, had good flow and structure and the headings broke up the paragraphs well while being interesting.

Like other comments more media integration and the scholarly articles would be needed for assessment. Have you considered more critical analysis of the topic where you express your opinion? A personal touch in blogs I feel turns it more into blogging rather than an article.

Look forward to reading more from you.

Sian

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