Sieran Lane
Jan 4, 2024

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Hey Natalie! I loved how her life seemed so quotidian at first, but you see more and more hints of something disturbing. Wow the plot twists were fantastic. :) I enjoyed the vivid sensory descriptions you wrote throughout as well!

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Sieran Lane

A queer trans writer and therapist. I help fiction writers complete their novels. Let's connect! https://the-transgender-therapist.ck.page/fiction-writing