Sarah Jolley
Jul 29, 2017 · 1 min read

Jordan, great Twine story! I’m really impressed that you successfully adapted your teleplay to an interactive format. Not only is your story engaging and all four characters highly relatable, but the options you provide to progress the storyline also feel like options I might take if I found myself in their situations (not including all the murder, though those links were fun to click through). Your story is fictional, but contains elements of real college life, and successfully conveys the interconnectedness of people on college campuses.