For the record, I love love love your parenthesis! And I was willing to allow them all!
Sean Howard
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Thanks, Sean. I know you were willing to allow them all, but you were right.

I’m glad it happened actually, because in the future, I will be definitely be asking myself if they add anything to what I’m writing. I may still choose to leave them in sometimes, but at least I’m more aware.

I know I have plenty of room for improvement, and I appreciate any suggestions you have for me.

Now, go on! Enjoy the rest of your trip!