Shantaram.
Ivana Knezevic
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Ivana Knezevic ,

I had to order it, anxiously awaiting its arrival. BTW, check out my latest flower poetry.

Please, please.

I have an ulterior motive in this request. As my good friend can you critique it? It’s a bit silly, but my good mood made it happen.

And honestly !!!, i can handle constructive criticism.

I liked it.

The title. “ from scratch .”

And OMYGOSH, i figured our how to make my quotes work on this very smart phone lol.

So simple,

ADD A PERIOD !

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