Thank you for your response Tasneem, which seems to go in two directions at once:
Ariane Goodwin

As an editor I can understand you… “tend to notice when words stand on their own two legs and reveal the writer’s core intention or unintentionally teeter off track.

In my opinion — and beyond grammar… I believe the beauty, magic and mystery of a poem lies in the amalgamation of different interpretations. I marvel at the diverse unraveling of it by the writer and readers.

In that sense, I truly once again value your feedback. Thank you.

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