Time Pieces
Heath ዟ
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Wonderful use of the refrain, Heath. In this form there’s a fine balance of movement—we tend to either go full circle to end up at the refrain again, or we rock forth and back to the refrain. Your triolet feels like little loops away from the refrain to give timely warnings. (See what I did there?)

(I suppose there are other ways that work, but I’ve seen so few examples of those that I recognised them yet; maybe this latest Poetry in Form collection will educate me.)

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