The Kids are Socialists Because Capitalism is Dickslapping the Planet
Holly Wood, PhD

Start with statements of evidence supported by clear, visible reasoning progressing to an argued conclusion.

What you have here is a rant. It consists of half-formed opinions which may be recognizable and intuitively appealing to people who already agree with you, but it will not convince anyone. It’s just a bunch of socialists patting each other on the back.

If that’s what you were going for, then well done.