Matilda Tay
Aug 28, 2017 · 1 min read

Hi Rula!

Great piece of work! I love the professionalism of your blog post. Great use of embedding your tweet as well. It was more than just a tweet made up of words, but it was a tweet with a video! Which definitely will grab more attention that words.

However, there are some improvements that can be done to make your blog post better than it already is.

  1. Include the Creative Commons licensing when referencing images, and remember to hyper link the description/name of the image and the CC licensing it is under.
  2. Instead of having a big chunk of the quote, you could summarise it in your own words that will shorten the paragraph, but still getting the point across.

Other than that, good work!

Cheers

Matilda TAY

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