Noah, your story on Domestic Violence towards male victims was powerful and definitely eye-opening. In my last class in the Women’s Studies department, our professor had a female speaker talk about this horrible subject. The speaker’s statistics for Domestic Violence for both Genders and even children was overwhelming. You did a very good job with your sentence transitions and the story flowed. You made your readers interested in your thoughts and concerns. Excellent job!!

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