WOW, thanks for the response! I didn’t actually take what you said as critical at all ☺ I appreciate that you took the time to write such a detailed response!

Can you explain your feedback at the beginning? I didn’t quite understand based off of the paragraph — but I would like to incorporate your feedback into how I write in the future (maybe edit this one as well).

Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughts as well! Your perspective on the psychology aspect gives me some food for thought.