The worst mistake of his life
Lizella Prescott
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Lizella Prescott, As an imperfect English major I was unsure why you chose ‘acidulous eyes.’ I only wish there were more words undulating over the two of them before your excellent violent paragraph. It is sometimes said less is more but here more would be more than welcome. You hit the literary ‘heavy bag’ with the best. Hit it for at least one more dancing, delightful round. ( Perhaps you had a touch of literary bronchitis when you penned this and thus all is explained.)

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