a woman who obsessed about everthing aside from the problem that needed obsessing over.
A Perfect Flaw
Kristofer Mc Cormack

There, it is. What a solid ending! Sounds like some deep-seeded reflection on who she is and why she is this way needs to happen for Anna, post haste.

I like how you incorporated the hairbrush into this, I could really see her obsessing over her hair and appearance and everything else. Nice job, Kristofer!

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