Aug 27, 2017 · 1 min read
Hey, Rula.
Some really interesting thoughts and i felt that your message was clear throughout. You might want to keep an eye on your word count for this as I believe that it runs just a bit over the set limit. I really appreciated the fact that as you made bold claims, there was always an in-text citation following it up reaffirming the reader that you really know what you’re talking about. Make sure you hyperlink to where you got your images and include a creative commons license in the caption of your images! This will save you a lot of trouble down the road. Amazing work, keep it up.
-Ben
