So, don’t submit to Chalkboard?
I was most recently giving this form a go, and you are soooo right, revision is key to this form. Lots of editing and pinching. Especially after I figured out that I had the rhyme scheme wrong! URG! I am letting it sit for now. I’ll revisit tomorrow, and see if it makes sense, and pay attention to the meter.
On a side note I will have a two-fer for tomorrow. A poem that is free form, and then the Nonet I turned it into.