Cookies
Shan Yu
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I like how much thought you put into coming up with the cookie idea and how colorful your cookie came out to be. I also really like how you have a picture panel that shows snapshots of the steps you took during the process. I wish there were larger images for your idea generation section. This way, it would be easier to see your initial thoughts on the cookie. What if the summary was somewhat shorter. This would allow for the reader to spend more time learning about your cookie, and might actually go better in the idea generation section of the blog.