I hope you will not take my feedback in any negative context.
Jk Mansi

Apologies from my end for the insensitivity. But like you guessed, it stemmed out of lack of knowledge than anything else. However, as far as authenticity is concerned, as a writer I am often driven by whimsy than a need to be believable or unique. I probably have a lot of growing up to do. :-) Thanks a lot for the feedback, though. Please have a wonderful day.

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