I hope you will not take my feedback in any negative context.
Jk Mansi
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Apologies from my end for the insensitivity. But like you guessed, it stemmed out of lack of knowledge than anything else. However, as far as authenticity is concerned, as a writer I am often driven by whimsy than a need to be believable or unique. I probably have a lot of growing up to do. :-) Thanks a lot for the feedback, though. Please have a wonderful day.

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