Your message is sound, and something I can stand with. However, I find your wording rather distracting. Specifically, I don’t want to hear how “stupid” the “Dumb” are. It is strong language, yes, but of low intellectual standing. (Couldn’t you call them the ‘misguided’? The ‘conclusion skydivers’, who are always too quick to jump to conclusions?) While I started off feeling like you were a credible person with a heartfelt, bold idea (“Curiosity is not a sin” = brilliant!), it soon felt like I was talking with a teenager or middle schooler. I stopped reading after “you’re an idiot if you decide to stuff your ears…”. Not because I stuffed my ears, but because my eyes rolled too far back into my head to read anymore.