Unless you are taking a course or submit your work to a group where members love nothing more than giving feedback, please do not ask random writers what they think about your work and how you can improve it.
Stop Asking People for Feedback
Mateja Klaric

Dear Mateja

I never asked you for any advice on anything and I never will after reading this. By the way I don’t give a crab about what people think of my writing and for the same reason as you : I write by necessity.

But that said I just can’t shut up when I read this. What could be more gratifying than sharing one’s knowledge with others. Kindness is the best healing tool. You must be really upset with yourself to be so unkind with others. I hope that one day you will find out that sharing is the better living…