Line-by-Line Meaning of W.H. Auden’s ‘The Night Mail’

Let’s break down “The Night Mail” by W.H. Auden line by line:

Vasudha Shah
4 min readMar 10, 2024

This is the night mail crossing the border,

  • The poem begins with an introduction to the night mail train, indicating its journey crossing the border, presumably between England and Scotland.

Bringing the cheque and the postal order,

  • The train is carrying valuable items such as cheques and postal orders, symbolizing financial transactions and communication.

Letters for the rich, letters for the poor,

  • The train carries letters addressed to people of all socioeconomic backgrounds, emphasizing the universality of communication.

The shop at the corner, the girl next door.

  • The mail includes correspondence for various recipients, from local businesses to neighbors, illustrating the breadth of its reach.

Pulling up Beattock, a steady climb:

  • The train begins its ascent up Beattock, a hill in Scotland, symbolizing the physical and metaphorical journey ahead.

The gradient’s against her, but she’s on time.

  • Despite facing an uphill climb, the train remains punctual and on schedule, demonstrating its reliability and efficiency.

Past cotton-grass and moorland boulder,

  • The train travels through landscapes featuring cotton-grass and rocky moorlands, evoking the rugged beauty of the Scottish countryside.

Shovelling white steam over her shoulder,

  • The train emits white steam as it moves forward, symbolizing its power and determination.

Snorting noisily as she passes

  • The train emits loud noises as it travels, indicating its presence and movement through the landscape.

Silent miles of wind-bent grasses.

  • The train passes through stretches of grassland shaped by the wind, creating a sense of serenity and solitude.

Birds turn their heads as she approaches,

  • Wildlife reacts to the train’s passing, indicating its disruption of the natural environment.

Stare from the bushes at her blank-faced coaches.

  • Birds and other creatures observe the train from the safety of bushes, highlighting the contrast between nature and technology.

Sheep-dogs cannot turn her course;

  • Even sheepdogs are unable to deter the train’s path, symbolizing its unstoppable momentum.

They slumber on with paws across.

  • Despite the noise of the train, the dogs continue sleeping, unaffected by its passing.

In the farm she passes no one wakes,

  • The train passes by farms without disturbing the inhabitants, illustrating its ability to travel quietly through inhabited areas.

But a jug in the bedroom gently shakes.

  • The train’s passing causes a jug in a bedroom to shake, indicating its impact on the surroundings.

Dawn freshens, Her climb is done.

  • As dawn breaks, the train completes its ascent, signaling the beginning of a new day.

Down towards Glasgow she descends,

  • The train descends towards Glasgow, indicating the continuation of its journey.

Towards the steam tugs yelping down the glade of cranes,

  • The train approaches Glasgow’s industrial area, where steam-powered tugs and cranes operate along the river.

Towards the fields of apparatus, the furnaces

  • The train approaches areas of industrial activity, symbolized by fields of machinery and furnaces.

Set on the dark plain like gigantic chessmen.

  • The industrial landscape is compared to a giant chessboard, emphasizing its vastness and complexity.

All Scotland waits for her:

  • The entire nation of Scotland anticipates the arrival of the train, underscoring its importance in facilitating communication and commerce.

In the dark glens, beside the pale-green sea lochs

  • People across Scotland eagerly await the arrival of the train, including those living in remote glens and along the coast.

Men long for news.

  • The people eagerly anticipate receiving news and correspondence delivered by the train.

Letters of thanks, letters from banks,

  • The mail includes letters expressing gratitude and financial correspondence from banks.

Letters of joy from the girl and the boy,

  • The mail includes letters of happiness from individuals of all ages, symbolizing the diverse emotions conveyed through communication.

Receipted bills and invitations

  • The mail includes paid bills and invitations to events, reflecting various aspects of daily life.

To inspect new stock or to visit relations,

  • The invitations may be for purposes such as inspecting new merchandise or visiting family members.

And applications for situations

  • The mail includes job applications, highlighting the role of communication in seeking employment opportunities.

And timid lovers’ declarations

  • The mail includes declarations of love from shy individuals, underscoring the role of communication in expressing emotions.

And gossip, gossip from all the nations,

  • The mail includes gossip and news from around the world, illustrating the breadth of communication facilitated by the postal system.

News circumstantial, news financial,

  • The mail includes both incidental news and financial updates, reflecting the diverse content of correspondence.

Letters with holiday snaps to enlarge in,

  • The mail includes letters containing vacation photographs, inviting recipients to share in the sender’s experiences.

Letters with faces scrawled in the margin,

  • The mail includes letters adorned with doodles or sketches, adding a personal touch to the correspondence.

Letters from uncles, cousins, and aunts,

  • The mail includes letters from extended family members, maintaining connections across generations.

Letters to Scotland from the South of France,

  • The mail includes letters from individuals in exotic locations, highlighting the diversity of communication facilitated by the postal system.

Letters of condolence to Highlands and Lowlands

  • The mail includes letters expressing sympathy to individuals across Scotland, illustrating the role of communication in providing support during difficult times.

Notes from overseas, from the islands

  • The mail includes notes from overseas territories and islands, reflecting the global reach of the postal system.

To the shore of the Bann from the Long Mynd,

  • The mail reaches recipients along the shores of the Bann river and the Long Mynd, symbolizing its extensive distribution network.

Letters of love from the sex mad rabbit,

  • The mail includes humorous letters, such as those purportedly written by a lustful rabbit, adding a whimsical touch to the correspondence.

“Please, Mrs. Mac, I’m sorry to trouble you,

  • The poem ends with a humorous plea from a fictional character, adding a light-hearted conclusion to the enumeration of letters.

But the line at Kelvin Hall tonight

  • The poem concludes with a reference to Kelvin Hall, a venue in Glasgow, suggesting that even at night, the postal system remains active and bustling.

Is a mile and a half.”

  • The final line emphasizes the efficiency and reach of the postal system, even at late hours.

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Vasudha Shah

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