I urge you to rewrite your article, because it’s just not thorough enough, as many comments down below argue as well. If you truly believe Clinton had done bad things, you should not be afraid of finding out the truth. There are only two options: you’re right, in which case writing a fool proof article only helps you, or you’re wrong, in which case you should probably reconsider writing the article at all. But currently, this is just not thorough enough. Assumptions are made too easily, about her ‘approval’ for instance.