Stewart Brand, a subject of one of my excerpts here (https://medium.com/medium-long/e50f65132b55), read it and sent in comments and corrections, which I appreciate. Here they are. — [From Walter Isaacson: For the full excerpt about Brand and the birth of the personal computer, see: https://medium.com/medium-long/e50f65132b55 . For another excerpt, on the birth of The Well and AOL, see https://medium.com/book-excerpts/b73f3288d4b5 Please feel free to put comments and corrections as notes in the margin.]