Response

I like that you tried using two completely different kinds of dough instead of just making minor adjustments to the first. I think this really improved the result of your final cookie because you had two very different outcomes of the same idea from which you could compare successes.

I wish you had played around more with different ways you could incorporate the cereal into the cookie. You could have tried mixing multiple cereals in one, or finding ingredients that mirrored those of the cereal to make it more like the cereal.

What if you had played around with changing the look of the cookie? It would be cool to see a multi-colored fruity pebble cookie, or a donut-shaped donut cereal cookie.