Response

I like your brainstorming sketches. They’re very neat and well drawn. I also like that you chose to change how the cookie is eaten rather than just shape or taste; it’s a creative take not many people thought of.

I wish you had chosen to expand on one of your other ideas you listed (chocolate pistachio, sweet tea…) because I think your other ideas were more original than chocolate caramel. Since your other cookie focuses on cookie form rather than flavor, it would have been cool to see you experiment with flavor as well.

What if you had made each cookie petal a unique flavor? Maybe try incorporating your other flavor combos into each petal, so the flavor is unique as well.