Cookies
Luke Brusletten
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I like from the start that your brainstorming is so broad. I think it can get easy to focus on a theme, or ingredient that overall limits the cookie’s potential from the start. Your brainstorming makes the cookie feel limitless, and I think that is a strength from the start.

With that said, I do wish you could see the brainstorming photo a bit clearer, and to align the page so the spiral is not in the photo so I can clearly read your process. Also along with that, I think it was creative to use Snapchat photos as your photography since you can easily write text on it, however, I think if you cropped the photos so you do not see your name and the bottom icons it would improve the professional look of your photos.

What if in your process you used something a bit more abstract, similarly to what you had in your brainstorming to your final idea? I think that the cookie tasted AWESOME, however it really did not seem to creative in its originality, as I have seen many so similar on Pintrest. I think if you took some of your really crazy ideas and worked with them with your current ingredients, you could have “WOW”ed us even more. Nevertheless they did taste extremely good!

-Jen Wiza