Thank you Indira. Great poetry. Concerning content I would say heedful instead of heedless.
Ken Zweig
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Hmm…Why would you say “heedful”? Water does not say, “Okay, I like that rock there, so I will fall on that. But I don’t like that patch of ground, so I’m not going near it.” It just falls, heedlessly.

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