Great work. Not surprising the language of the bill itself is not as straight forward as a non-legislator would hope. I worry the broad definition will block its passing, better language was captured in this post getting at the heart of the matter which is decentralization, not being digitized. Comparison below.
Underrated skill! I help others write better and through the lens of articulating their story/viewpoint on a product or service improve my writing. Will check out the pod, always looking for tools for myself and others!