Zahra Ahmad
Jul 27, 2017 · 1 min read

It’s always a good idea to first give a brief introduction of your topic which you did so well done! At the same time, in order to make this piece even better, how about you avoid repetition of points and articulate your thoughts in a structured way. To do so, you should apply the business writing skills so that your work is even more coherent. I liked how you shared the lessons from the books and added quotes to make it more informative. You wrote about your experience in a detailed manner. Overall good effort! Looking forward to even more well-written PWs in future!

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