Your Money or Your Life: A Free Story
Icy Sedgwick
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I like it! Its a little detail but

“I nudge the corpse with the toe of my stolen boots. It rolls into the ditch behind me…”

doesn’t ring true. If you nudge something with your toe it rolls forward not backwards. Also, generally speaking, a highway robber (lurking in the bushes?) is going to have the ditch between him and the road, at least in my minds eye…

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