POETRY

How I See You

A free verse prompted poem

Ravyne Hawke
A Delicious Torment
2 min readSep 1, 2024

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In the first light of a pastel sky —
swirls of baby blue and cotton candy pink
periwinkle and glooming peach — you’re there
sitting alone on the park bench, waiting

Waiting for some prince to pass by
or at the very least, a foot soldier
A hero to take you away — whisked
off your feet — from this mess of life

A life of disappointments and sacrifice
too much give and very little take
for taking means freedom and solidarity —
foreign words in your limited vocabulary

But this is not how I see you — strength
stronger than you’ve ever been given credit
or even credited yourself — passionate
flooding the world with crimson and amber

Your generosity should never be unmet
but held sacred, celebrated, honored —
Your laughter should be met with joy
not taken as a sign of mental collapse

If you could but take that first step
rise from that bench, claim your destiny
and realize you need a heroine, not a hero —
you’d see what I see — your savior is you

©2024 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.

I am participating in the PoCoChapMo ‘24 over at The Poetry Cove, hosted by UK poet, Adam Gary. Today’s prompt is ‘the first step’.

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A Delicious Torment
A Delicious Torment

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A Delicious Torment is the personal blog of Lori Carlson where she jots down her disjointed thoughts, madness, and random ramblings.

Ravyne Hawke
Ravyne Hawke

Written by Ravyne Hawke

Writing Coach, Poet, Fiction Writer, Essayist, Artist, Dreamer | “Enlightenment is when a wave realizes it is the Ocean” ~Thich Nhat Hanh

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