Bilimoria Tech

Here are the changes I made —

1. “Close the gap between where you are today and where you want to be” — is this a tech consulting company or some life coach’s personal page? This subheading is rubbish and needs to go. It is too vague and does not related to software AT ALL. I replaced it with “Give your website, app, or platform the gift of life”. It isn’t perfect but at least it references technology and takes a stance indicating that Bilimoria Tech is a software doctor which brings us to #2.
2. “Do you need software help? We offer a free consultation”. Software help is not a clearly defined term. Free consultations are par for the course. They are no longer unique. So, I dropped “We offer a free consultation” and led with simply “Looking for a Software Doctor?

Thoughts?

Aside — The default look and feel is VERY template-y meaning the site owner probably picked a template, made the bare minimum changes, and published the site. As a potential customer, if Bilimoria Tech can’t be bothered about their own website, will they care about mine? Also, white font on orange looks ugly.