CloudSPRT

Edited the headline and subtitle as above.

Reasoning

1. The original headline was good but this version narrows the focus down to a specific problem of stalled growth
2. The original subtitle was all about you and your technology prowess. The rule of thumb is to try to explain how your product can solve a customer pain. Corollary to the rule — be as specific as possible about which pain you are trying to solve. The updated copy tries to bring the focus back to the customer’s pain.

It’s interesting that below the fold, you DO refer to the customer’s pain where you ask “Is your customer base expanding and you need a way to manage customer enquiries?”

I have simply moved it front and center above the fold.