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Sai Ramachandran
Founder @ https://www.2ndlook.xyz. Ex-Goldman. Recovering Techie. Former New Yorker. Indian. Strategist. Word lover. Email: hello@sairamachandr.in

CollectTrust

Trust me, you want to make these changes
  1. I felt “Be a Trusted Business” was too abstract. I’d go with a more concrete “Win More Business” headline.
  2. The original subheading is action oriented (good) but the connection between becoming more trusted is not obvious (bad). So, I changed the subheading to “Leverage positive reviews collected from your best customers to grow!” The connection between winning more business and collecting reviews is more obvious here.
  3. I didn’t like that you were using “Join..” twice in the CTA and the promo text below the CTA. I changed the promo text a little to “…and get 50% off forever”

If you like this feedback and act on it, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look".