Convopanda


- Very conversational headline with a pointed value prop. Love it.
- I modified the subheading to bring the focus back to the site visitor by inviting them to “Learn..” rather than telling them to “Enroll..”.
- I changed the tense of the first sentence in the subheading to “…increased..” and “…made…” .This is a subtle change which I believe will convey to potential subscribers that using bots actually works!
Hope this helps.
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