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Sai Ramachandran
Founder @ https://www.2ndlook.xyz. Ex-Goldman. Recovering Techie. Former New Yorker. Indian. Strategist. Word lover. Email: hello@sairamachandr.in

Dugglo

Overall, I liked your site but I felt the text was a bit repetitive. Like Kevin said in The Office -

Why waste time say lot word when few word do trick?
Like? No Like? No mal.
  1. I felt “Awesome bedtime story” was being repeated repeatedly. So I pruned it.
  2. I highlighted FREE from the reader’s perspective. Instead of showing off how good you are because you are giving away a free story, I placed the site visitor in the driver’s seat.

Awesome UI though. Evokes children’s stories!

Here’s a great bedtime story. This dude critiqued your website and you bought him coffee. The End.