HostedMetrics

1. Check out Indemandly before I get into the changes I’d like to suggest. Notice how their value prop gets typed and then erased.
2. In order to connect with your site visitors from the get go, my first change would be to actually list out the top 3–4 monitoring and metrics products the same way Indemandly does it. So, your headline becomes “Let us monitor IfluxDB|Graphite|Akumuli|DalmatinerDB|Prometheus|RiakTS..” where each of the names gets typed out, then erased.
3. My reasoning is simple — when you put the product names up for people to see, you show that you know exactly what your sweet spot is. People trust transparency. Don’t make them hunt for names of products below the fold.

Hope this helps.